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The Coffeehouse

INTRODUCTION

Once I got over the initial infatuation you get from that first time in a creative writing class, I developed a love/hate relationship with writing poetry. I have fun doing it, and there's a certain drive inside me to get thoughts down on paper - but I hate the results.

Now anyone who knows me will tell you that I'm my own worst critic of my work. However, I really have it in for my poetry. I think it's great when I put it on paper, but after it's done I'm totally disgusted. It's like I got so interested in the rhythm of the words that I missed the point of what I wanted to talk about.

So why post a poem here at all? Because... on occasion... rarely... very rarely... I go back to a poem and it strikes me; "Hey, this one turned out all right" (to date, this has happened paid nothing but contributor's copies, I might as well post it here and get still paid nothing -- with the chance it might get read by people familiar with my other work.

And if lightning should ever strike again, this lone entry will get some company.

Oh, and the reason I call this section "The Coffeehouse"? Easy. It's that whole stigma associated with making p*etry public... in dim places that serve lattes served by bohemian types while someone reads to the accompanyment of bongo drums.

Nowadays we call places like that "Starbucks."


THE POEMS


ANOTHER ONE WENT DOWN TODAY

It's dark
and his breath comes out in steam
frost lingers on the ground
and city lights glimmer in the distance like the future

Another one went down today
It made the morning paper
And as the cold makes stiff
his fingers and resolve
He knows he's got to go back

Another one went down today
It's broken on the ground
Bright vacation clothes like confetti
Across an icy landscape

The air brings pictures on the chill
He's seen them all before:
C law marks across the ground
Fresh turned earth scent mingling
With things heavy and sinister

Another one went down today
It's there before his eyes
Somebody's paperback, a photograph
A paper full of yesterday's news
A tennis racket, cross-stitch
Unmailed postcards that say 'I love you'

The frost is off the windshield now
The air is full of fumes
A familiar whine calls out his name

He turns,
knowing that one went down today

He turns from the picture bringing wind
to duty through the cold
past ghosts of crumpled metal

Soon he will be gone
with it all put behind him
Soon he will forget
And deafen his ears to the voice inside
that whispers
insistently
words he doesn't want to know:

"Another one went down today."

BACK

VICKIE HAS A DATE

Vickie, Vickie, she has a date
She's meeting him at Perkins
And I'll bet they're going dutch.

She'll have the burger
And he'll have the fries
They'll sit across the table
They'll look at their food.

And when it all is over
--an after dinner mint!
It's out the door they go...
(Maybe she'll hold his hand).

Nine-thirty -- my, it's late!
Her thoughts return to the empty plate
A handshake instead of a kiss...
Maybe they'll do it again sometime.

BACK

THERE WAS A QUITE UNHAPPY GIRL

There was a quite unhappy girl
Who made her mark upon this world
The purpose of her life, it seems
Was to ferment unwholesome schemes
On moonlit nights the boys she'd tease
Until they'd beg her for release
And when at l ast they spilled their seed
She kept reminders of the deed
And thus it was the world was cursed
With what would only be the first

of children
named Nip, Bink, Tuck, Hoover, Eyelash
and the twins, Damascus and Rapunzel.

Word of her prowess made the rounds
Was known by all throughout the town
Her brood in tow for all to see
Such misbegotten progeny
No man would take her for a wife
With trophies of her sordid life
But even though she was deplored
It just took one knock at the door
So while the townsfolk had her shunned
She spent another year fecund

with children
named Nip, Bink, Tuck, Hoover, Eyelash
and the twins, Damascus and Rapunzel.

And thus produced, out of her need
More desperate, mewling mouths to feed
Until one day she'd had her fill
And she took cash out of the till
Then slipped out in the dark of night
With dreams of glory in her sight
A future that was hers to choose
Escape from all the men she'd used
She'd buy respect, she'd buy new friends
The chance to start her life again

with children
named Nip, Bink, Tuck, Hoover, Eyelash
and the twins, Damascus and Rapunzel.

She hid as long as she had dared
But no-one in her home town cared
Their place was pleasant, it was nice
Without her kids, without her vice
No extradition would be waived
If it was far from them she stayed
And so she lived there, long in doubt
Until the money had run out
Until she had again seduced
And in good time she had produced

more children
named Nip, Bink, Tuck, Hoover, Eyelash
and the twins, Damascus and Rapunzel.

These children, we should now aver
All turned out to be just like her
With pouting lips, seductive eyes
They break hearts with their scheming lies
As far and wide they all have gone
To have more babies just like mom
Like locusts they all multiply
Until "Enough!" is our sad cry
But there's no way to make amends
In truth, we'll never see the end

of children
named Nip, Bink, Tuck, Hoover, Eyelash
and the twins, Damascus and Rapunzel.

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© 2007 by Joe Clifford Faust